Final Fantasy XIII

 

Considering starting a new fanfic.

This time it’s Final Fantasy 13.

Fang Lightning pairing.

I’m going to start experimenting with angst, tension and something more fast paced than Tasogare.

No, I’m not abandoning my Shiznat fic. I’m just inspired to write a FLight one at the moment. Still plodding through Tasogare although priority might change.

It all really depends on inspiration. I’ll get back to work now but not before dropping a preview of my new fic.

 

Fight or Flight

Disclaimer: Final Fantasy 13 belongs to Square Enix

Chapter 1: Weaknesses

Just experimenting

I dunno, I’m procrastinating and trying to study. But I found my muse and it got me rolling… Here’s the first section of Chapter 4 of Tasogare. I need my betas… Oh, M-chan, where are you when I need you? T___T

Anyway, this might spoil the chapter… Consider it a teaser. But it’s still subject to change. I don’t know, I’m not satisfied with it… yet. Too early for Shiznat development? It doesn’t flow right… Oh God, I need to work on paragraphing.

Tasogare

Disclaimer: Sunrise and Stephanie Meyer own Mai-Hime/Otome and the Twilight series respectively

Chapter 4: Fujino Shizuru

Tasogare Chapter 3 draft #2

Various changes made. Unedited, unbetaed, unchecked and so, very raw. But it should be the final version, discounting small grammatical changes.

 

Tasogare

Disclaimer: Sunrise and Stephanie Meyer own Mai-Hime/Otome and the Twilight series respectively

Acknowledgements:

 

Chapter 3: The Student Council

Tasogare Chapter 3 draft #1

Finished the latest chapter! Here’s my roughest unbeta-ed draft. Just ignore my notes at the bottom.

Tasogare

 

Disclaimer: Sunrise and Stephanie Meyer own Mai-Hime/Otome and the Twilight series respectively

 

Chapter 3: The Student Council

Tasogare chapter 2 draft #1

Forgot to add chapter one. I’ll do that when I can be bothered… If you want, it’s on my fanfiction account.

So I bring the draft of chapter 2. Currently stuck on chapter 3…OTL

It’s filled with my corrections and notes. Please bear with it… Sorry.

Tasogare

Disclaimer: Sunrise and Stephanie Meyer own Mai-Hime/Otome and the Twilight series respectively

Chapter 2: Fuuka Gakuen

Tasogare Prologue

I have finally posted my fanfic on ff.net! Woot! Now to edit my other chapters…

Here’s the official link for those who wants it:

Title:	Tasogare (Twilight)
Chapter:	Prologue
Rating:	T
Summary of story:	Natsuki decided to go to Fuuka Island to start afresh. Little did she know that she was just about to be thrown into the middle of a war between three major power groups that inhabit that island. Which side will she choose?
Warnings:	AU, OoC, OC, Shiznat (in the future), violence, blood and gore
Summary of chapter:	Walking down a dark alleyway at night isn’t such a good idea, especially when…
Fandom(s):	Mai-Hime/Otome and Twilight series
Disclaimer:	Sunrise and Stephanie Meyer
Link:	Tasogare- Prologue

So enjoy and wait for the next chapter?

Tasogare: The Parody

This is Grak’s parody version of the first half of my prologue. She was trying to show me how to write an awesome fanfic. It’s crack and totally lovable so enjoy!

Tasogare Prologue Draft #1

Woot! Finally completed the prologue. Right now, Lia and Grak are editing it. But I’ll just post the finished, unedited piece here. This draft still contains my edits and random comments directed at my editors… So enjoy~ and feel free to add comments.

Edit: This is actually draft version 2.5…

Tasogare

Disclaimer: Sunrise and Stephanie Meyer own Mai-Hime/Otome and the Twilight series respectively

Prologue:

Tasogare Update #4

I’m going through a major rewrite of chapter 1. After checking out the “Natsuki’s Prelude” translated by apollyon_0 which
jaded088 had kindly supplied me, I’m making some major plot changes to the story. That means I’m rewriting the later parts of chapter one so 1. It’s more canon/in character. 2. It flows more smoothly 3. It makes more sense.

I’m cutting out the stuff about Natsuki’s father sending her a bike. I’m changing that to maybe absurd amounts of money and a rather annoying email that pissed her off. I’m not letting Natsuki forgive him that easily. So the later parts will be changed to fit that…I’m not sure how but I’m working on it now. I also added and cut so dialogue. That’s because some parts are too OoC and unnatural… I’ll get back to work now and hopefully I’ll post something up when I’m done.

Oh and starryheavens07 I might send you the rewritten part to edit…(later perhaps?). It’s a rather major change. Hope you’ll bare with me. Really, thanks for helping me, I’m forever in your debt.

Tasogare Update #3

This is what I’ve got so far for my prologue chapter. I will be on a hiatus till the half-yearly exams are over so I won’t be working on this for a while. I do hope that this chapter do have the panicky, suspense feeling I’m trying to get across. It’s sad that it’s cut off at the most crucial bit! Oh well, be back in 3 weeks?